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Grey hair, wrinkled face,
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Grey hair, wrinkled face,
They walked slowly,
Hand in hand,
They stepped together.
They stopped in between several times. They took a breadth and started again. The church was glowing with candles. Candles of love that hung everywhere.
He bent on his knees, Just like ages before. The only difference though was he did it with aching legs. His best suite hanging loudly over his shoulders, he held her hand.
The same hand which he had held many years before. She still felt shy as first time whenever he did so.
"Will you marry me?", he asked with a pause - "Will you marry me again?".
She looked directly in his eyes. Her white gown looked bigger for her today. Yet she looked gorgeous.
"yes", she spoke with a smile. "It's a yes my love for every-time you ask".
They exchanged the rings and locked their lips. The whole world screamed - true soul mates.
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Beautiful!!! Amita, you are romance queen :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Megha...
DeleteI do like romantic stories...:)
Very cute and romantic :) All the best for BAT.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinay...:)
DeleteNice, sweet & romantic post, Goodluck for BAT50!!
ReplyDeleteThanks dear....
DeleteSame to you....
I imagined what you have described! :) Very sweet and i guess every woman's dream.
ReplyDeleteAll the best for the BAT50. :)
Thanks Megha....
DeleteSame to you as-well...
I can relate to that--their age, their long link, their vow.
ReplyDeleteGlad that some people are really able to relate... Wonderful feeling
Deletethat was so cute :) nice write up.
ReplyDeleteThanks Shweta
DeleteRomantic words ! Very sweet
ReplyDeleteThanks Yogi
DeleteWhat great writing...I was so visualizing the couple as I read it. I smiled and could imagine me saying exactly what she said to my husband "It's a yes my love for every-time you ask"
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Pamela
DeleteReminds me of my own dearly departed parents - they renewed their vows at one point (can't remember which anniversary), but just missed their 50th anniversary when my Dad passed away. :-(
ReplyDeleteSad for your loss Lee... I cannot imagine the feeling of a partner when he/she is left alone after almost entire life living in love... But that's life...
DeleteBy the way, my grandparents have crossed their 50th anniversary some years back...:)
awww, this is lovely! Totally enjoyed this episode. Totally romantic.
ReplyDeleteThanks Janelle
DeleteAh..Imaginary thoughts can be some times so expressive...Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteAll the Best for BAT 50.
Glad that you liked it Vajra...
DeleteBeautiful story, hope all have long lasting love :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Meenal
DeleteSuch a delight to read this one! I hope every couple finds love in each other forever! :)
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Khushboo
Thanks Kushi
Deletelovely story, very romantic
ReplyDeleteMy Blogaton#50 post Soulmates
Following your blog now
Thanks Cifar....
DeleteJust visited your entry... It was really cute...
Lovely story!
ReplyDeleteThanks dear
Deletesoul mates beyond ages!
ReplyDeletesweet and cute. :)
Thanks Aishwarya
DeleteThat's so cute :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Simran
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