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Sunday, December 7, 2014

No Place Like Home

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I walked slower than ever,
My hands were empty,
My eyes were sore,
As the sun went down,
My heart cried more.
Birds went back to nest,
Animals creeped inside their holes,
Broken and heavy inside,
I never wanted to return to those walls,
Oh! My soul shouted,
There is no place like home.
There I was,
Standing low,
Wait!
A hand held my hands,
Warm as ever,
Those eyes met mine,
Twinkling as before,
I am sorry for the sin,
Finger rested on my lips,
Stopping me speak,
Hand in hand,
Eye in eye,
We stepped into our world,
You stole my words,
There is no place like home.

Written for the Prompt - there is no place like home on Facebook page - Wings Of Change

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9 comments:

  1. Mesmerizing...soothing effect it generated while reading.

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  2. Certainly there's no place like home :) Good one :)

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  3. No place like home - I agree, but I could have never expressed so beautifully.

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  4. Indeed no other place like home! Beautifully articulated :))

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  5. So beautiful...got to be lucky to have someone love you beyond your mistakes ...nice :)

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    1. Thanks Megha...
      It's a fiction, but yes, one need to that their luck when they have someone to love them in any case...

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